The colour scheme is great, soft...as for the figure the "line of action" is strong...but the head seems little big, if that was done on purpose then its neat....
The dark sky could have been little intresting...its looking flat...
Could you please write something about the artwork....
I think am expecting a lot from you.... keep workin at it...

I really like the way you use the colors. Excellent work.

cool work!
i like your style, nice character, nice composition, cool colors .
+9

The anatomy is a little bit off, using references would help you to make it perfect Nice colours and composition! The body should reflect a little bit the colour of the ground and clothes.
+7

she is cute

Nice work. As gulluanime said the colour scheme is really great.
To me anatomy and other things aren't so important...
Well done!

eline saglik +10
very good +10

the colors and pose are great
the chest is a bit strange.

good job!
+8

cool colors and compo...I agree that the character's anatomy could use some more attention...nice job! +7

süper olmus elif ..

bu arada gulyabaninin kiyafeti iyimis

wow sorry I did not see this sooner, i have been away for awhile, this is really cool, I've been hoping you would post something new and this go's beyond those expectations. +8

very weird but I like it! The cave could be darker inside i think. Nice character.

Thank you people for all your criticals !
And Andy it's not a cave only piece of rock thank you too for your plaudit

wow! fantastic! .. we call her "Ghoul biabani"(in persian) that means desert's ghoul am i right? is she the same creature?

yes thats true it's ghoul thanks all of you

wonderfull! my top

atla atla bebek!! +8 )))

Elif,

I agree with Diane, you need some training in the human figure. Only a couple of weeks of intense training can do a lot. It will come. Keep going.